Crtic's, Comments, suggestions?...
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Crtic's, Comments, suggestions?...
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Re: Crtic's, Comments, suggestions?...
Needs some work. Seems out of proportion. The top one looks strange. Of course you're not as good, but the first time you play the piano you're not going to be Bach. The first several pieces are focused on contours and cartooning, but the last one abandons your style.
Practice more. You need to set a time and a place where you can practice in peace.
Practice more. You need to set a time and a place where you can practice in peace.
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Thankyou, The last one of the Moon was because my mother said I needed to 'open my creative expertist' and 'expand my horizions'. I'm trying to master drawing others people's characters so then I can try my hand at designing my own. I obivously need to work on my technic (please excuse the many spelling mistakes)
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Mercy wrote: The top one looks strange.
I tryed to combine Raven's red and blue self. The color pattern on her outfit is blue and red shaded together. The location is her mind, I liked the look of the red suns and floating rock platues. It's alittle fuzzy because I couldn't hold a camera straight-out of 11 shots that was the best one.
I aperciate the feedback.
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Well the fact that you draw people is one thing, there's nothing wrong with broadening your horizon but if you draw people people people people then you switch over to the psychedelic and trippy it makes no sense. Why do you want to draw better characters and practice by drawing something completely unrelated?LostShadowSoul wrote:Thankyou, The last one of the Moon was because my mother said I needed to 'open my creative expertist' and 'expand my horizions'. I'm trying to master drawing others people's characters so then I can try my hand at designing my own. I obivously need to work on my technic (please excuse the many spelling mistakes)
No I mean I know what it is, it's just that Raven's proportions and headshape looks strange. I'm not commenting about the quality of the picture, the focus or shakiness of the camera, I'm talking about how she looks in general. The way she's standing. I know where she is, I'm familiar with the episode where Beast Boy and Cyborg travel in her mind.LostShadowSoul wrote:Mercy wrote: The top one looks strange.
I tryed to combine Raven's red and blue self. The color pattern on her outfit is blue and red shaded together. The location is her mind, I liked the look of the red suns and floating rock platues. It's alittle fuzzy because I couldn't hold a camera straight-out of 11 shots that was the best one.
I aperciate the feedback.
If you want to draw better cartoons you must first learn how to draw realistically. You asked for an honest critic, the truth hurts sometimes, but if you defend your drawings that you asked for critique, then you shouldn't have asked at all.
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Thank you. I have never really been able to draw people, My teacher(family friend/uncle) died in 2006 and I've been trying to build from what he taugt me. The results aren't that good.
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Yeah-that foot is what I call an 'Epic fail'. I just couldn't leave Superboy footless...'amazing'? Mercy and Mame are still WAY better.
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