Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
Mercy wrote:Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?
exactly!! <3
well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.
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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
Rianna Lauren wrote:Mercy wrote:Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?
exactly!! <3
well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.
Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.
Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
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I see... Well, moving on, then.Mercy wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Mercy wrote:Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?
exactly!! <3
well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.
Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.
Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
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In other news, pluto is no longer a planet. poor lil frozen pluto! lolRianna Lauren wrote:I see... Well, moving on, then.Mercy wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Mercy wrote:Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?
exactly!! <3
well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.
Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.
Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:In other news, pluto is no longer a planet. poor lil frozen pluto! lolRianna Lauren wrote:I see... Well, moving on, then.Mercy wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Mercy wrote:Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?
exactly!! <3
well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.
Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.
Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
...That was a joke about old news being old, yes?
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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:In other news, pluto is no longer a planet. poor lil frozen pluto! lolRianna Lauren wrote:I see... Well, moving on, then.Mercy wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Mercy wrote:Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?
exactly!! <3
well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.
Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.
Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
Pluto is still a planet to me!!
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So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
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Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
Twas a subject change.
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Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
Twas a subject change.
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Rianna Lauren wrote:Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
Twas a subject change.
Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol
Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
Twas a subject change.
Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol
:lol!:
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:lol!: <--- is that like.. Goku hair..?Rianna Lauren wrote:Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
Twas a subject change.
Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol
:lol!:
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Mercy wrote::lol!: <--- is that like.. Goku hair..?Rianna Lauren wrote:Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:Thecrazykid3649 wrote:Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:
Twas a subject change.
Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol
:lol!:
yesh XD
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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It
Interesting work, Snake. Your style is quite promising, and has improved noticeably from your earlier efforts. Very good characterization as well, and the comedy bits were genuinely funny.
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