Re: Deception Works

by **Vandal** 12/12/2010, 9:32 pm

They look really stiff, their limbs look funny, I'd change the font, and the woman looks like she has a dong.

Needs refining, don't look only at proportions, but their stance as well. Figure drawing helps.

by **redeagle321** 12/13/2010, 8:51 am

I still only see the red X x_x

by **TheDeceiverGod** 12/13/2010, 9:00 am

Mercy wrote:They look really stiff, their limbs look funny, I'd change the font, and the woman looks like she has a dong.

Needs refining, don't look only at proportions, but their stance as well. Figure drawing helps.

Well they're wearing heavy armor so they're supposed to look stiff, and I don't see what you mean by their limbs looking 'funny.' But I'll concede the font is lame and my lady-crotches need work. Not like I get a lot of chances to examine them ya'know ;p

by **Vandal** 12/13/2010, 11:04 am

Well the thing is most of your characters look stiff. The limbs are... well they just look like long ovals connected to each other :\

by **TheDeceiverGod** 12/13/2010, 12:57 pm

Any suggestions?

by Fishing4Infinity 12/13/2010, 1:23 pm

May not be an expert like Merc, but I know of a good place to practice figure drawing.

Posemaniacs

Also a great place to practice gesture drawings.

by **TheDeceiverGod** 1/28/2011, 5:04 pm

Deception Works - Page 6 Ready_to_roll_by_thedeceivergod-d388yq2

I guess you could call this promotional art for the new Dice Game, I did it in my free time since I can't move forward with the Dice Game till I get some answers.

Anyone can submit, just need some ideas. Just give glance here

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