Re: Gotham City's Midnight Riders (ENDED)

by Tÿ 1/25/2010, 5:57 pm

Jake walked up behind Ghost. "yo, man, can you help me?" The energy emmitting off the kid made Gohst's air stand on end.

by Fishing4Infinity 1/25/2010, 5:59 pm

"Hmmm... Judging by the way the blood is streaked across the floor," Karmy said while stepping along side the trail, being careful not to touch it, "And the bloody fingers spread about 5.4 inches apart. I'd say he dragged himself all the way from upstairs.. Poor guy."

by Ghost 1/25/2010, 6:08 pm

Ghost turned around in a heartbeat, plasma blade glowing in his hand, sniper pointed at the boy.
"What's up?" He said in his ghostly voice.

by Luck 1/25/2010, 6:10 pm

(Mind if I get in on this? If not, it's all good; but, this definitely looks hella fun.)

by **Vandal** 1/25/2010, 6:11 pm

Luck wrote:(Mind if I get in on this? If not, it's all good; but, this definitely looks hella fun.)

(Just make a character sheet!)

by **redeagle321** 1/25/2010, 6:13 pm

Casius looked at the strange boy near Ghost. "Well well, what 'ave we here?" He murmered. He crossed his arms and looked at the kid. He didn't like to be held up before a big pay day, but it's not like the bank was going anywhere.

by Fishing4Infinity 1/25/2010, 6:14 pm

Luck wrote:(Mind if I get in on this? If not, it's all good; but, this definitely looks hella fun.)

(Hells yeah whoever you are!)

by archiesangel 1/25/2010, 6:14 pm

The pounding was getting unbearable. This guy had no control at all over his emotions! Kahna could feel the anger bubbling up and as he yelled at her she screamed "SHUT UP YOU BASTURD! CAN"T YOU SEE I TRYING TO HELP, YOU SON OF A b*tch???" She gripped the knife tighter, trying to keep on her feet.

by Rain 1/25/2010, 6:24 pm

"I SPEAK UNTO THOU IN JUST ACCORD AND THOU MOCK ME? IF IT IS A DUEL YOU SEEK, THEN I SHALL GLEEFULLY ACQUIESCE! IT SHALL BE ONE YOU NEVER FORGET!"
Greht proceeded to summon his powers and slammed the ground with the intent of sundering, but when he tried, very little energy was released.
"GAH!" he muttered, "My powers have severely weakened. I must work with this...fool."
"FINE. SO BE IT. TELL ME YOUR INTENTS AND DESIRES, OR I WILL REPEAL MY GENEROSITY. FOR NOW, WE MAKE AN ACCORD. ANSWER MY QUESTIONS AND I SHALL ANSWER YOURS."

by Luck 1/25/2010, 6:42 pm

Name-Artanis
Age-Irrelevant
gender: Male
Alias-Artanis

Appearance
Height: 7'
Weight: 340 lbs
Dress:

Gotham City's Midnight Riders (ENDED) - Page 8 Tyreal10

Eyes: None
Skin: None
General: A cloaked archangel whose past is as tragic as it is heroic.

Abilites: Flight, amazing strength, speed, agility, skill with a sword

Weapons:
His angelic sword is unbreakable and amazingly sharp, but it is quite heavy, even for Tyrael.

Strengths: Heart of a lion, master swordsman, pride, agility, sense of humor
Weaknesses: His sword hinders his agility, as well his size. Pride. Impatience
Likes: Revenge, challenges, decapitations, loyalty, kindness, intelligence

Dislikes: Disloyalty, stupidity, crime, greed.

Bio: Artanis was once the most celebrated Angel in the world and Heavens long ago, until his blunder; he was put in charge of ridding the world of a brutal tyrant, but, instead fell in love with the tyrant's daughter. After realizing he might lose his authority and position in the sky, Artanis killed the tyrant, only to be tried to be killed by his lover. He begged her to forgive him, but she would not, and when she discovered his weakness, he killed her. Unfortunately, he was exiled, losing his angelic power and has spent his entire life trying to right wrongs in the world, whenever and wherever he is needed most, mainly in hope of redeeming himself and earning his spot in the heavens once again. (It has been centuries since his failure)

by Rain 1/25/2010, 6:53 pm

Dude, ur character is WAAAAAY OVER POWERED.

by Luck 1/25/2010, 6:57 pm

Rain_of_Tears wrote:Dude, ur character is WAAAAAY OVER POWERED.

What do you think should be toned down?

by archiesangel 1/25/2010, 6:59 pm

Kahna took a breathe. Finally the medival thug was calming down. She could think clearly again. If only he would stop shouting... Man, how she wished she was home eating that steak in the fridge. Kahna turned the knife in her hand. She nodded her head, hoping the questions wouldn't last too long, she had better things to do then talk with this guy.

by **Vandal** 1/25/2010, 7:00 pm

Luck wrote:
Rain_of_Tears wrote:Dude, ur character is WAAAAAY OVER POWERED.
What do you think should be toned down?

Uhh read the rules Luck >_<

No immortality and no god-like powers.

by Rain 1/25/2010, 7:02 pm

Luck wrote:
Rain_of_Tears wrote:Dude, ur character is WAAAAAY OVER POWERED.
What do you think should be toned down?

First you should read the other characters abilites and match them. Flight is still okay I suppose. Just flamethrowers and immortality are a little bit much. Try and make your guy 'fightable.' If they don't have a good or at least decent chance of beating him, then your character archeatype is wrong. Still seems wicked cool though I must admit. Just make up something like some of his powers were taken away lol. *shrugs*

by archiesangel 1/25/2010, 7:03 pm

Luck wrote:Name-Artanis
Age-Irrelevant
gender: Male
Alias-Artanis

Appearance
Height: 7'
Weight: 340 lbs
Dress:

Eyes: None
Skin: None
General: A cloaked archangel whose past is as tragic as it is heroic.

Abilites: Flight, amazing strength, immortality (Not 100%. More explanation in weaknesses), speed, agility, skill with a sword, lightning can shoot at his fingertips, flame from his palms

Weapons:
His angelic sword is unbreakable and amazingly sharp, but it is quite heavy, even for Tyrael.
Lightning can shoot from his fingertips, causing devastating pain on its target.
Flame thrower in his lands, literally. Pretty self explanatory.

Strengths: Heart of a lion, master swordsman, pride, agility, immortality, sense of humor
Weaknesses: His sword hinders his agility, as well his size at times. Pride. His Achilles heel is his own sword; although immortal, if he is stabbed by his own sword, he can be killed.
Likes: Revenge, challenges, decapitations, loyalty, kindness, intelligence

Dislikes: Disloyalty, stupidity, crime, greed.

Bio: Artanis was once the most celebrated Angel in the world and Heavens long ago, until his blunder; he was put in charge of ridding the world of a brutal tyrant, but, instead fell in love with the tyrant's daughter. After realizing he might lose his authority and position in the sky, Artanis killed the tyrant, only to be tried to be killed by his lover. He begged her to forgive him, but she would not, and when she discovered his weakness, he killed her. Unfortunately, he was exiled and has spent his entire life trying to right wrongs in the world, whenever and wherever he is needed most, mainly in hope of redeeming himself and earning his spot in the heavens once again. (It has been centuries since his failure)

(Ideas for toning down appreciated. Lemme know.)

Sweet drawing man!

by Luck 1/25/2010, 7:03 pm

Mercy wrote:
Luck wrote:
Rain_of_Tears wrote:Dude, ur character is WAAAAAY OVER POWERED.
What do you think should be toned down?

Uhh read the rules Luck >_<

No immortality and no god-like powers.

My badddd

Rain_of_Tears wrote:
Luck wrote:
Rain_of_Tears wrote:Dude, ur character is WAAAAAY OVER POWERED.
What do you think should be toned down?

First you should read the other characters abilites and match them. Flight is still okay I suppose. Just flamethrowers and immortality are a little bit much. Try and make your guy 'fightable.' If they don't have a good or at least decent chance of beating him, then your character archeatype is wrong. Still seems wicked cool though I must admit. Just make up something like some of his powers were taken away lol. *shrugs*

I like it.

by **Vandal** 1/25/2010, 7:05 pm

The army burst through into Wayne Estate. Mercy and Karmy looked behind them hearing footsteps and shouting. "Crap! If they see us in here with his butler they might jump to conclusions!" Mercy warned her. "We gotta jet!"

by Luck 1/25/2010, 7:05 pm

(Better, I hope?)

by Ghost 1/25/2010, 7:06 pm

Luck wrote:(Better, I hope?)

(Nice drawing bro)

by Rain 1/25/2010, 7:07 pm

"Where am I and who are you? What time am I in and what is going on around here? What are all of these... things?"

by archiesangel 1/25/2010, 7:11 pm

'Well that's real specific' Kahna thought. "Um, you are in Gotham City....my name is Kahna........it's 2010....and um....Batman is dead..................and you just gutted a cab. Also known as a car."

by Fishing4Infinity 1/25/2010, 7:13 pm

"I'm on it!" and Karmy snapped her fingers and they were on the roof of Mercy's apartment.

by **Vandal** 1/25/2010, 7:20 pm

10:15 - Light Rain

Mercy landed on the floor face first. "Ugh.. Still not use to the whole portal teleporting thing Karmy... Where's the rest of the Teen Titans anyways? It would help to clear up this hell hole. Its not like the military is doing anything about it." The craziest night hit Gotham City, and shook the world.

by **Vandal** 1/25/2010, 7:22 pm

Luck wrote:(Better, I hope?)

Character approved. I'm assuming you're a Hero?

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